Tuesday 11 November 2014
Because of the feedback we received about our news footage, the main thing that was mentioned during the feedback was how formal Rens language was, and also the tone of voice and seriousness she was speaking in and how it seemed to differ from our branding, especially when compared with how Mark presented his live package.
So in order to prepare to re-film her news anchor section, i worked on the script again just to make sure that the listenability of the script was not too formal in comparison to Marks live, but also timed the script in order to make sure that enough space was left so that Ren could slowly pace herself whilst reading the script, knowing exactly when and how long to pause for.
